Amazing story, characters and scenes. I don't want to play until the end of the episode. I want to drag it out as long as I can. That's how good it is!
Errr... do you like to get insulted and bullied so much ? I wish the writers would tone her down one notch (or two), I agree she can be really good at times (like most of the scenes in the mansion), but often it's just TOO much, especially since the MC is such a WEAK, PASSIV guy. There are scenes where she is downright manipulative and evil, and there is NO ONE to put her in her place. Such bratty character should encounter some opposition, otherwise they become insufferable REAL quick.
Well, i wonder how much of that anger that she shows is just a facade? I mean sure, she will likely be purely a domination fantasy type of option, which is not my thing, but sometimes, it can surprise you, unless the Developer says otherwise, Ashley could be a 'diamond in the rough' type of girl. But overall, until that is proven correct or incorrect, i will stick with Emily, she is cute, loyal and bad ass.
Ashley is not really a romantic option anyway. The "relationship" meter is still baffling me, I was pretty high before the last update with Emily, and at the end, even though I had barely any interaction with her during that whole "rich mansion episode" (obviously 'cause she's not really in it), my meter appeared to have taken a huge dive. and I failed the last check. Weird
It is likely a scripted RP loss, since she likely is upset that Ashley brought the MC and not her and resents the MC as a result.
I wouldn't know about failing checks, i tend to edit the save file and max out the RP stat and just play normally, i am not much of hoping its the right choice, i would rather pick what makes sense to me for my character in an RP sense, i mean when i played a complete horn-dog route before episode 8 came out and it sounded like the MC is so clueless and dumb and when i was his age and lacked experience with women, i never acted like he is....its rather dumb. But when i focused on say Emily, the MC's personality seems more balanced, but ultimately still a whiney child.
Seems to be influenced by your decision to lean on Em or Ash while waiting for the train. I tried both with max Em Affection Points, after having fun with Ash in the train it resulted in a 6 Affection Point loss after Ep.8. Maybe because there was no promise from Em after leaning on Ash.
Really? I do not always, but some of the time I do. But I play it first. I beleive the developers deserve something for their hard work and dedication.
I agree, it is just Patreon just told me my account was being fraudulent after trying to use it once and so i thought....screw it and let the account get deleted.
The game is really good! I love the way charactes have they own personalitty, just one thing that makes me nervous sometimes: the MC can't just shut the fuck up, i understand that this make his personalitty but it should've more choices on what he says.
i stil cant download EP7 it keeps going to gogle drive and giving the same error since the day it was uploaded !!!
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Does anyone know what the title of the song is? For each episode that passes, I first listen to the song about 5 times I can't help but to listen to this song :))
This game is one of the first games I started following (244 days ago today) and it's still one of my favorites adult VN. Any ide if and when next update will be?
I had a simalar problem with MegaSync. I had to uninstall MegaSync and then delete all left over files on my pc that had anything to do with Mega and that fixed it. For some reason there was a file that told Mega I was over the limit and it never updated when the download limit was supposed to reset. I hope this helps.
Well, i just recently signed up here to review this game and others i have played and while i have not contributed cash wise, i am going to contribute here with an opinion on said game and my suggestions.
I love the idea of the story and i have to say, my favourite is Emily, she is tough, strong, independent, but is also feminine.
Ashley, while interesting, there seems to be problems with her on an emotional level and i look forward to seeing what the Developer does with this character, maybe there is a way to make her...less bitchy, but stay the same when it comes to not taking any BS from guys in her life.
Samantha is the common MILF wet dream being manifested, but it seems rather problematic as you play the game with the amount of flirting options.
When it comes to the MC, i just don't understand how he can be so utterly stupid and clueless, he spent the better part of his teenage phase of his life in a male only environment, so i can understand being able to talk to Luis as well as he does, but how is he able to be confident to talk to women without any experience with them? I mean when i was 19 years old, i knew more than this guy and i never really had any contact with women outside of my family, being overweight tends to make you not desirable.
While i am unable to really talk to women that well unless they start the conversation, i however will never be able to say if a woman is hot or not like this MC does, it just makes no sense how he can behave like this and then still have no clue why Emily and the Doctor are basically competing against each other for the MC's attention.
Also, the lack of options in the released content is abit limiting for my taste, i would suggest they add in more options so you can avoid doing something entirely stupid, which even i know with my limited experience with women is stupid, his juvie experience is no excuse for his lack of common sense.
I've really wanted to download and play this game for a very long time; but the download location wouldn't let me for quite a while -file was unavailable or some such.
So when I finally succeeded in downloading and started playing, I was anxious to explore the story and the decisions I might make along the way.
I wanted to like this game, I really did. But ultimately, I just couldn't.
And in short, this is why:
MC is far too apologetic for my kind of roleplaying / immersion; and the path with Emily seems fixed somehow -whenever I'd like my MC to tell her off or some such, I'm funneled back onto the loveydovey path for Emily. For a character with anger management issues he keeps apologising for every little infraction -even the ones he did not cause.
I would have liked the option to tell some NPC's under certain conditions to simply feck off. Aside from a possibly bad first impression you might have with Emily, I haven't come across a single vertebrae for any kind of backbone for the MC. Even if my initial choice was to be rude to Emily, the guy decided to apologise to her the very same evening. And after that it just devolved into one big mea culpa.
I tried to keep on playing, to find some redeeming quality, but after Episode 4 was concluded I simply quit to desktop. My suspension of disbelief has been seriously crippled and the illusion that choices matter quickly dissolved -especially when my choices are reduced to simply clicking the only single response on my screen.
The art is very nice as is the original premise and setting -and I really like Samantha as an NPC. Music is also a great asset. But it just doesn't work for me; the shallowness of the MC (horney and misogynistic on one hand, and the distinct lack of a spine combined with an overabundance of apologies on the other) disrupts any type of immersion and personal investment.
When I would've liked the MC to back off or tone down his horney conduct, there usuallly was no choice to be made whatsoever -or only one single option to proceed with the story, when I'd considered he'd simply taken things a bit too far.
Notwithstanding, I still applaud your hard work, dedication and skills to create this game and share it with a community of players,
I guess, that in the end, it's just not my cup of tea.
Does anyone know the song/artist name for the song in the main menu? I've looked everywhere for it. Google can't identify it at all and searching up portions of the lyrics provides no correct results. If the song name/artist is available on patreon please tell me.
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It worked this morning, thank you
unable to download update Google says too many have downloaded and can't download. this is the only game that this seems to happen with....
Yep, but only the MS-Win / Unix Version has trouble !
UPDATE 2021-03-31 19:50 Download Works
Amazing story, characters and scenes. I don't want to play until the end of the episode. I want to drag it out as long as I can. That's how good it is!
when i try downloading it i get the forbiden error on chrome
Trying to download but google is saying too many people downloaded it, can we get a mirror upload
Awesome! I was just wondering when the next episode would be released.
When are we going to get episode 8
Are we ever going to get episode 8 on here
Thank you, game creator, for bringing Ashley to life. She's everything I could have wished for. Almost made me tattoo her name on my chest too.
Errr... do you like to get insulted and bullied so much ? I wish the writers would tone her down one notch (or two), I agree she can be really good at times (like most of the scenes in the mansion), but often it's just TOO much, especially since the MC is such a WEAK, PASSIV guy. There are scenes where she is downright manipulative and evil, and there is NO ONE to put her in her place. Such bratty character should encounter some opposition, otherwise they become insufferable REAL quick.
Well, i wonder how much of that anger that she shows is just a facade? I mean sure, she will likely be purely a domination fantasy type of option, which is not my thing, but sometimes, it can surprise you, unless the Developer says otherwise, Ashley could be a 'diamond in the rough' type of girl. But overall, until that is proven correct or incorrect, i will stick with Emily, she is cute, loyal and bad ass.
Ashley is not really a romantic option anyway. The "relationship" meter is still baffling me, I was pretty high before the last update with Emily, and at the end, even though I had barely any interaction with her during that whole "rich mansion episode" (obviously 'cause she's not really in it), my meter appeared to have taken a huge dive. and I failed the last check. Weird
It is likely a scripted RP loss, since she likely is upset that Ashley brought the MC and not her and resents the MC as a result.
I wouldn't know about failing checks, i tend to edit the save file and max out the RP stat and just play normally, i am not much of hoping its the right choice, i would rather pick what makes sense to me for my character in an RP sense, i mean when i played a complete horn-dog route before episode 8 came out and it sounded like the MC is so clueless and dumb and when i was his age and lacked experience with women, i never acted like he is....its rather dumb. But when i focused on say Emily, the MC's personality seems more balanced, but ultimately still a whiney child.
Seems to be influenced by your decision to lean on Em or Ash while waiting for the train. I tried both with max Em Affection Points, after having fun with Ash in the train it resulted in a 6 Affection Point loss after Ep.8. Maybe because there was no promise from Em after leaning on Ash.
"i tend to edit the save file" care to explain how to do that ? ;)
I laughed alot when I found out the other guys name because my names also luis 😂
CH 8 is on lewdzone.com
Theirs a song in this game thats amazing whats the name of the song
If it is the song from the main menue, it's "Will you wait" from Marisa Law, http://www.marisalaw.ca
Dude needs to put and sell ep. 8 on here for 5$ or 10$, not everybody wants to make a patreon.
I have personally tried and it automatically considered my activity fraudulent.......so i didn't bother even trying.
I never, EVER pay for unfinished products, so i am waiting.
Really? I do not always, but some of the time I do. But I play it first. I beleive the developers deserve something for their hard work and dedication.
I agree, it is just Patreon just told me my account was being fraudulent after trying to use it once and so i thought....screw it and let the account get deleted.
The last dev log was from October. Does the dev post any where else about the game, or is it reasonable to suspect that this game is abandoned?
On his patreon he posted that chapter 8 is 95% done. On a post from last Sunday
The game is really good! I love the way charactes have they own personalitty, just one thing that makes me nervous sometimes: the MC can't just shut the fuck up, i understand that this make his personalitty but it should've more choices on what he says.
Yeah, he's a winy, bitchy, crybaby. There are times I have to quit because he's just such a unaware douche. it's really cringy at times.
Any idea how to skip dialogue? There is options for it in the settings but I dont see anything, great game btw!
All I know is that you can skip conversations you've already been through by pressing the tab or ctrl keys.
the story in this one is amazing, well written and entertaining looking forward on you with a emily walkthrough half way done
can i not be reuploaded to * MEGA * synk instead please so i can read it
i stil cant download EP7 it keeps going to gogle drive and giving the same error since the day it was uploaded !!!
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Does anyone know what the title of the song is? For each episode that passes, I first listen to the song about 5 times I can't help but to listen to this song :))
Here:
And her homepage:
http://www.marisalaw.ca/
This game is so fucking good keep up the good work man can't wait for the next episode, any idea when will it be released?
emily is just too damn cute when she gets angry at mc hahaha
Yeah she is, while Ashley is hot and all, she has that punk rock chick look going for her, but Emily is just far more cuter than her.
any news on episode 8?
Yeah, i would like to know that as well, i mean, i have a save for Emily playthrough and a save with Ashley.....so this is gonna be awesome.
This game is one of the first games I started following (244 days ago today) and it's still one of my favorites adult VN. Any ide if and when next update will be?
would love to give it a try but the android download link has been ?over limit? since October 2020... is there another source?
I had a simalar problem with MegaSync. I had to uninstall MegaSync and then delete all left over files on my pc that had anything to do with Mega and that fixed it. For some reason there was a file that told Mega I was over the limit and it never updated when the download limit was supposed to reset. I hope this helps.
Well, i just recently signed up here to review this game and others i have played and while i have not contributed cash wise, i am going to contribute here with an opinion on said game and my suggestions.
I love the idea of the story and i have to say, my favourite is Emily, she is tough, strong, independent, but is also feminine.
Ashley, while interesting, there seems to be problems with her on an emotional level and i look forward to seeing what the Developer does with this character, maybe there is a way to make her...less bitchy, but stay the same when it comes to not taking any BS from guys in her life.
Samantha is the common MILF wet dream being manifested, but it seems rather problematic as you play the game with the amount of flirting options.
When it comes to the MC, i just don't understand how he can be so utterly stupid and clueless, he spent the better part of his teenage phase of his life in a male only environment, so i can understand being able to talk to Luis as well as he does, but how is he able to be confident to talk to women without any experience with them? I mean when i was 19 years old, i knew more than this guy and i never really had any contact with women outside of my family, being overweight tends to make you not desirable.
While i am unable to really talk to women that well unless they start the conversation, i however will never be able to say if a woman is hot or not like this MC does, it just makes no sense how he can behave like this and then still have no clue why Emily and the Doctor are basically competing against each other for the MC's attention.
Also, the lack of options in the released content is abit limiting for my taste, i would suggest they add in more options so you can avoid doing something entirely stupid, which even i know with my limited experience with women is stupid, his juvie experience is no excuse for his lack of common sense.
Really love the game, please keep up the good work.
amazing game,if not one of the best 3d/visual novel games i played ,the character details are if not the best i seen 10/10
why don’t people make games for iOS?
Can't download apks like android can. You have to go through apples app store. Too difficult
Love this game. Hope the next patch comes up.
this game has ntr? hope not
Is there a set date for new episodes?
Idk i would like to know aswell
I've really wanted to download and play this game for a very long time; but the download location wouldn't let me for quite a while -file was unavailable or some such.
So when I finally succeeded in downloading and started playing, I was anxious to explore the story and the decisions I might make along the way.
I wanted to like this game, I really did. But ultimately, I just couldn't.
And in short, this is why:
MC is far too apologetic for my kind of roleplaying / immersion; and the path with Emily seems fixed somehow -whenever I'd like my MC to tell her off or some such, I'm funneled back onto the loveydovey path for Emily. For a character with anger management issues he keeps apologising for every little infraction -even the ones he did not cause.
I would have liked the option to tell some NPC's under certain conditions to simply feck off. Aside from a possibly bad first impression you might have with Emily, I haven't come across a single vertebrae for any kind of backbone for the MC. Even if my initial choice was to be rude to Emily, the guy decided to apologise to her the very same evening. And after that it just devolved into one big mea culpa.
I tried to keep on playing, to find some redeeming quality, but after Episode 4 was concluded I simply quit to desktop. My suspension of disbelief has been seriously crippled and the illusion that choices matter quickly dissolved -especially when my choices are reduced to simply clicking the only single response on my screen.
The art is very nice as is the original premise and setting -and I really like Samantha as an NPC. Music is also a great asset. But it just doesn't work for me; the shallowness of the MC (horney and misogynistic on one hand, and the distinct lack of a spine combined with an overabundance of apologies on the other) disrupts any type of immersion and personal investment.
When I would've liked the MC to back off or tone down his horney conduct, there usuallly was no choice to be made whatsoever -or only one single option to proceed with the story, when I'd considered he'd simply taken things a bit too far.
Notwithstanding, I still applaud your hard work, dedication and skills to create this game and share it with a community of players,
I guess, that in the end, it's just not my cup of tea.
Hey I was just wondering why when I download the Android version I can't seem to install it. When it 'finishes' installing it says 'App not installed'
Does anyone know the song/artist name for the song in the main menu? I've looked everywhere for it. Google can't identify it at all and searching up portions of the lyrics provides no correct results. If the song name/artist is available on patreon please tell me.
I found just this: https://youtu.be/w7Lz8H3vmAo
And her own homepage:
http://www.marisalaw.ca
WOA THANKS MAN